From Draft to Polished Line
Show three options, remove them, and ask what stuck. If respondents paraphrase correctly, you’re close. If they remember mood but not words, simplify. If nothing remains, shorten syllables and sharpen imagery until a phrase lingers.
From Draft to Polished Line
Say the line softly across a table; does it still feel strong? Then imagine it on a tote, a box, a wall vinyl. If it holds tone without extra copy, you’ve likely found a keeper with genuine versatility.
From Draft to Polished Line
Post two lines with identical imagery. Track saves, shares, replies, and quoted phrasing in comments. The winner is not just liked—it’s repeated by others. Document which sounds and structures your audience naturally echoes.
From Draft to Polished Line
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